Demented Ink.
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5th-Aug-2012 07:20 pm (UTC)
That was wonderful!

Hi. I'm new to Justified, but absolutely adore it. Not new to m/m action as I write in the Queer as Folk fandom. Normally, I'm not a fan of supposedly straight canon characters getting it on in a slash fic, but you did a great job. As a writer, I'm impressed by how good your grammar and punctuation is, not to mention how well you've laid out the story. And you took advantage of that one scene in the bar, which I have to admit, it occurred to me that Tim might be gay, and you ran with it! Good for you. It worked, even for me, the huge skeptic. :)

You also did a very good job with the sex. I've read a lot of that in my fandom and it's often cringe-worthy. Yours wasn't. It was believable and, yes, enjoyable, lol!

I like Raylan and Tim together and this? Well, it adds a whole new dimension to that.

If you don't mind, I'll rec this on my journal. Many QAF folks are also fans of Justified! :D
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