This is so good and there is nothing else I can say other than to agree with all te other comments. But I might try:
Your Tim andnRaylan voices were spot-on . It's tough to read fiction about my boys when the only color,of Tim is that he speaks hick-like Southern and Raylan is portrayed as a tough guy who talks tough even when he realizes he likes the sex. I've read plenty of those. You didn't do that in any way . You used nuance and a great ear and eye to ms,e these guys in your story those guys we love from TV.
But getting back to me and my needs......t I really want is a sexy and one shot (hee hee) story like above about my next husband TiM Gutterson. ( I may have to have an occasional moral lapse and do Raylan though.....)
I want Tim and a girl fiction. I don't want a lot of back story about the girl because ....I don't care. Make her a junior Marshall, younger then Tim, make her gorgeous and brunette and very well bosomed. She has an accent because she's either from Russia or Israel. She also was brutally beat as a child....by her mother. She has PTSD because some of what she did in tne Isreali army - she did well, but certain events hunt her .
And that's it. That's all you need to know. PTSD, victim of child abuse, handy with a wô,em, beautiful but hasn't had sex in a long time because she, like Tim, got sick of meaningless fucks. SHE'S JUST LIKE TIM.
And everyone can see the sparks fly so when they finally do it, everyone is kind of relieved.
When they do get to THAT point, they do it.....a lot. This would be written in tne same loving descriptive detail as you did with the story above. Lots of detail.
Then happy ending and a epilogue that's another sex scene.
Why won't anyone write this? We may need to love Tim mostly in oir written word, because i have bad vibes about the number of sppearances for TG this season.
In writing to two of tne writers for tne snow (twitter)( and tne writers are VJ Boyd and Leonard Chang) I( please. Twit them too!) have gotten hints that there might not be as much Tim this season. And if Raylan is hosing around with the Crowes in Florida, what does that mean for tne soon to be Mr. Changshafu? So, please, can you write a story like the one above or tell me if there is one that I've missed. Thank you again and I may read this again, just before I turn in for the night.
Love it, but..........
Your Tim andnRaylan voices were spot-on . It's tough to read fiction about my boys when the only color,of Tim is that he speaks hick-like Southern and Raylan is portrayed as a tough guy who talks tough even when he realizes he likes the sex. I've read plenty of those.
You didn't do that in any way . You used nuance and a great ear and eye to ms,e these guys in your story those guys we love from TV.
But getting back to me and my needs......t I really want is a sexy and one shot (hee hee) story like above about my next husband TiM Gutterson. ( I may have to have an occasional moral lapse and do Raylan though.....)
I want Tim and a girl fiction. I don't want a lot of back story about the girl because ....I don't care. Make her a junior Marshall, younger then Tim, make her gorgeous and brunette and very well bosomed. She has an accent because she's either from Russia or Israel. She also was brutally beat as a child....by her mother. She has PTSD because some of what she did in tne Isreali army - she did well, but certain events hunt her .
And that's it. That's all you need to know. PTSD, victim of child abuse, handy with a wô,em, beautiful but hasn't had sex in a long time because she, like Tim, got sick of meaningless fucks. SHE'S JUST LIKE TIM.
And everyone can see the sparks fly so when they finally do it, everyone is kind of relieved.
When they do get to THAT point, they do it.....a lot. This would be written in tne same loving descriptive detail as you did with the story above. Lots of detail.
Then happy ending and a epilogue that's another sex scene.
Why won't anyone write this? We may need to love Tim mostly in oir written word, because i have bad vibes about the number of sppearances for TG this season.
In writing to two of tne writers for tne snow (twitter)( and tne writers are VJ Boyd and Leonard Chang) I( please. Twit them too!) have gotten hints that there might not be as much Tim this season. And if Raylan is hosing around with the Crowes in Florida, what does that mean for tne soon to be Mr. Changshafu?
So, please, can you write a story like the one above or tell me if there is one that I've missed.
Thank you again and I may read this again, just before I turn in for the night.