http://owned-by-a-cat.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] owned-by-a-cat.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] demented_dee 2012-03-23 06:46 am (UTC)

"You want to... spank me?" Renji asked, breathless and dubious.

Well, who wouldn't? I've never read a foursome before (sheltered upbringin', sorry) but this really works. I like how you keep the concern and affection running right through. Adds a real nice glow to the story.

Thanks for sharing that. And..... more, please?

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